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Thank you for your pertinent generous feedback on the first version. Version 2 is 1100 words longer. I have incorporated most of your feedback I on the first version, which prompted me to add and make some changes of my own. I look forward to hear what you think of the new version.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Merci pour vos commentaires g\u00e9n\u00e9reux et pertinents sur la premi\u00e8re version. La version 2 est plus longue de 1900 mots. J’ai int\u00e9gr\u00e9 la plupart de vos commentaires sur la premi\u00e8re version, ce qui m’a incit\u00e9 \u00e0 ajouter et \u00e0 faire quelques changements. J’attends avec impatience de savoir ce que vous pensez de la nouvelle version.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Welcome Back Beta Readers<\/h2>\n\n\n\n

Below, please choose the download link of the format you would like to read.
At the end of the story, you will find instructions on how to leave feedback.
For the benefit of future readers and for helping me become a better writer, I thank you.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Click here<\/strong> to download<\/strong> the English PDF<\/strong> Version 2 of Melanie’s Monster<\/em>.<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Click here<\/strong> to download<\/strong> the English EPUB<\/strong> version 2 of Melanie’s Mons<\/em><\/a>t<\/a><\/em>er<\/a>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Re-bienvenue aux b\u00eata-lecteurs et b\u00eata-lectrices<\/h2>\n\n\n\n

Veuillez choisir ci-dessous le lien de t\u00e9l\u00e9chargement du format que vous souhaitez lire.
\u00c0 la fin de l’histoire, vous trouverez des instructions sur la fa\u00e7on de laisser des commentaires.
Au b\u00e9n\u00e9fice des futurs lecteurs et lectrices et pour m’aider \u00e0 devenir un meilleur \u00e9crivain, je vous remercie.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Cliquez ici pour t\u00e9l\u00e9charger<\/strong> le PDF<\/strong> fran\u00e7ais version 2 de l’histoire Le Monstre de M\u00e9lanie<\/em>.<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Cliquez ici pour t\u00e9l\u00e9charger<\/strong> le fichier EPUB<\/strong> fran\u00e7ais version 2 de l’histoire Le Monstre de M\u00e9lanie<\/em>.<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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